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SharpI · Posted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 8:06 pm Post subject:

If dogger1972's idea isn't right, then maybe something like...

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Title: "Homecoming"

The video after: "The Cowboy"

Posted by: Jonas

Featuring: Daniel, Bree, Jonas

Summary: Jonas turns on his camera. He and Bree are in the house, but everything's pell mell. As they throw things together and get into the car Jonas tells us breathlessly that Daniel's called Bree and he's in some kind of trouble. You can hear Bree's still on the phone with Daniel.

Now J and B are in the car, trying to find the place where Daniel is. It's night, they're in a sketchy part of town, and they're lost. Bree is having trouble getting anything out of Daniel; then she loses the connection. She's sobbing. Jonas stops the car, steps out, shouts "DANIELBEAST!" There's no one there. Bree is saying, "there's the sign, he's supposed to be here, why isn't he here?"

Jonas leaves Bree in the car, heads out on foot into the dark with the camera. Everything is dark and strange. He hears a scream - Bree. He runs back to the car, the door is open, Bree is gone. "BREE!" He runs around the car, looking in every direction - nothing.

Then, in the headlights, Bree appears. She's trying to support Daniel but he slumps and she can't hold him up. Jonas runs over. Daniel looks like hell. "Help me!" Bree is trying to lift Daniel. Video ends.

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janesalteredstates · Posted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 11:29 pm Post subject:

my new prediction:

Jonas: Bree is in her room. Blah blah my parents are mysteriously missing. Look at my sad, pretty eyes.

Bree: I am starting to get worried. Daniel has been missing for a week now under suspicious circumstances probably by some creepy secret society that my parents belong(ed) to which I will not tell you about even though I know all about it since my dad died. What career should I choose?

Rolling Eyes

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janesalteredstates · Posted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 11:31 pm Post subject:

lostgamer · Casual Observer Joined: 01 Feb 2007 Posts: 58

SharpI

Wow. Quite a turn of events. But what's missing? Jonas.

Jonas who seems to have a connection to Tachyon....

So - next prediction:

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Title: "The Exchange"

The video after: "Me for Daniel"

Posted by: Jonas

Featuring: Bree, Jonas

Summary: Bree is vidding herself riding in the car with Jonas. She explains that they are on their way to meet Lucy. Bree will have a week with Lucy to get ready for the ceremony. Then she and Daniel will be released.

Jonas interrupts to say that they should release Daniel to him right now. He and Bree argue about it - then she looks around, alarmed. "Where are we? Where are we going?" Jonas starts to say something about a different route, but she's not buying it. Finally he comes out with it: he's kidnapping her. For her own good. He'll post the vid so Lucy will know that Bree's not at fault. Bree starts to protest but he cuts her off: it's a Jonas we haven't really seen before. Cold and kinda scary. The video ends.

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HoorayForMeImMakingOut · Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 10:44 pm Post subject:

ok i think this would be a super cool idea for the story.

Bree acts like shes going to do the Ceremony, then she shows up busting through like rambo

and starts shooting everything up!

And then she spots Lucy and they stare at eachother, Lucy bitch slaps Bree

and deacons start closing in on her..

Then da ta da da! Tachyon appears out of the woods like a ninja in the night,

With brother on the opposite side of the woods

shooting arrows and swinging around on vines like Robin Williams from Jumanji and everyone starts battling to the death!

Meanwhile Jonas sneeks up to the poor brainwashed Daniel and snatches him

Then, Lucy and all the Deacons die

And Bree, Tachy, Jonas, Brother, and Daniel all hug and go get icecream

anyone else agree??
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gogo · Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 10:54 pm Post subject:

And then Daniel cooks up that little chicken after stuffing it with pine nuts...

I must say HoorayForMeImMakingOut, your story is quite compelling. I wish I was creative enough to share an interesting prediction. All I've got is more spin art for Daniel, maybe someone borrows a car from Jonas's fleet of automobiles and Bree lives. Oh and perhaps someone (Jonas) plays a guitar with focused intensity

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HoorayForMeImMakingOut · Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 12:58 am Post subject:

lol thanks gogo, I have quite the active imagination Idea

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SharpI · Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 6:19 pm Post subject:

Okay. We're sure that Bree has something up her sleeve. Jonas too. But are they working together or separately? Will their plans put them at cross-purposes (eek)?

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Title: "Following Bree"

The video after: "Storm the Castle"

Posted by: Jonas

Featuring: Bree, Jonas

Summary: At Jonas' home. It's late at night. Jonas is vidding Bree in secret, from another room. She is standing by the phone, indecisive, then picks it up and dials. We listen as Bree arranges to meet with - someone. Cut - Jonas is now vidding himself in his car. He explains that he's following Bree to this rendezvous. Hoping she doesn't see him. Then he's cursing - he lost her. He drives around, then spots her car (his other car) parked in a wooded area. He parks and gets out. No sign of her. He slinks down the street and sees - a white van. Uh-oh. He's trying to figure out if anyone's inside when a car comes down the street. He hides. It's a black Lincoln town car. It stops by Bree's car and Bree gets out. The car drives on. The van starts up and follows it.

Bree gets into her car, drives it away. Jonas follows. She's going home. What was that all about? He decides to post the video as soon as he gets home, he'll let us figure it out. He'll talk to Bree in the morning.
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janesalteredstates · Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 3:58 pm Post subject:

I predict spin art and slurpees.
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