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QtheC
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 12:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yes, I see the updated version (most recent post) - I think the Deacons are going to go into shock.

Bree's face really looks a lot like her. Something about Jonas' nose looks off to me maybe, but it's a cool drawing anyway.
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 12:49 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

i spent ten minutes just now, and i think it's the fact that jonas' face is just too long in my drawing. does that make sense?
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 6:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

marlasinger wrote:
i spent ten minutes just now, and i think it's the fact that jonas' face is just too long in my drawing. does that make sense?


i think it's more so the width. Jonas has a long-ish face but it's thin.
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 7:30 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think you are right, Marlasinger, about the face being tall in the drawing, and maybe there is some subtle tweaks to the shading around the nose and brow and chin line that could make it more recognizably Jonas ... maybe lip/brow/eye shapes? Did I leave anything out? Maybe it's the blue complexion, lol.

Faces are subtle. This drawing is cool - you should just keep it and maybe if you want to try sketching Jonas again from scratch a few times to see if you can 'capture' him the way you did Bree.

I couldn't draw a can of soup.
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 8:17 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hey I can see it now! Yay!

I think it looks awesome. Bree is dead on.
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 10:01 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

okay i'm going to try it again, and we'll figure out the main features of jonas's face.

i'm thinking his main features are the space between his eyes, the tip of his nose, his upper lip, and his jawline/chin - he's got a dimple in his chin that I didn't draw.

Updates soon.

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 11:05 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Firstly, I'm posting so I don't miss any updates.

That said, I can't miss any updates because this is too wonderful!
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 11:14 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

may I make a suggestion?

On Bree/Rogue's face, the nose blends in with her left cheek/eye ocket area. Maybe a little bit more of a definition with some light shading there would work to seperate
(it's either that or her eye is squished)
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 12:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

QtheC wrote:
I couldn't draw a can of soup.


I decided to take myself up on that challenge. What do you think? Smile

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 12:54 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good Job, Q!! I think that for a first try, it came out very nice.
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 4:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

These are way beyond WOW!!

Have the Dynamic Trio seen these gorgeous things yet? You know Daniel's gonna want to be included! Very Happy

Uhh...unless... Q, that's not the Daniel pic, right? I mean, tomato soup is a definitely superhero...depending, but... Wink


(sometimes my poor little brain cell goes into over-drive...and sometimes under-drive is more like it...guess what today is!)
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 7:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

1) more definition at Bree's nose, can do.

2) BRAVO! Very Andy Warhol, QtheC. Awesome.

3)The can of soup was just a challenge that Q took himself up on, after mentioning he can't draw.

4) Daniel is most def. included, he'll be Gambit. Smile Just spoke to Yousef about it and Gambit works really well, so that's what we're going with. Very Happy
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 8:59 pm    Post subject: nice Reply with quote

These are fun.
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 10:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

chershaytoute wrote:
Uhh...unless... Q, that's not the Daniel pic, right? I mean, tomato soup is a definitely superhero...depending, but... Wink

Actually, it's a Soup-er hero! Shocked
Daniel could be "all that, and a can of soup!" as they say, in um, cool places where cool people say things.
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 12:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

QtheC wrote:
chershaytoute wrote:
Uhh...unless... Q, that's not the Daniel pic, right? I mean, tomato soup is a definitely superhero...depending, but... Wink

Actually, it's a Soup-er hero! Shocked
Daniel could be "all that, and a can of soup!" as they say, in um, cool places where cool people say things.


Lowered above, I do love the way you think!! But, uh, let's just keep it to tomato, okay...? Laughing
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