Wrong Play - Revision history

FH14 at 00:44, 19 April 2010

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FH14 at 00:32, 20 May 2009

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Shiori at 00:34, 3 April 2009

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Shiori at 20:17, 17 February 2009

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Shiori at 17:28, 12 December 2008

2008-12-12T17:28:50Z

Kevin at 16:48, 28 November 2008

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Charles Phoenix: /* Transcript */

2008-11-23T10:57:49Z

‎Transcript

Kevin at 15:47, 22 November 2008

2008-11-22T15:47:39Z

72.77.92.44 at 15:38, 22 November 2008

2008-11-22T15:38:14Z

Oiselet: /* Notes */

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‎Notes

@@ Line 11: / Line 11: @@
 | length      = 1:19
 | description = We were lied to.
-| location    = [[General LA area|Outside of the LA Jail]]
+| location    = [[General LA area|Los Angeles]], [[General LA area|Outside of the LA Jail]], [[Estelle's apartment]]
 | tags        = {{tags|10|amateur|blood|chapter|cult|extreme|fun|hymn|illa|jonas|lg15|lied|lonelygirl15|play|reed|resistance|sarah|ten|wrong}}

@@ Line 16: / Line 16: @@
 <!-- Leave production credits
       blank if there is no information. Do not specify "none". -->
-| execprod    =
+| execprod    = Miles Beckett, Greg Goodfried, and Amanda Goodfried
 | coexecprod  =
 | assocprod   =
@@ Line 22: / Line 22: @@
 | setprod     =
 | producers   =
-| assistprod  =
+| assist      =
-| lineprod    =
+| lineprod    = Lynn Kramer
 | supprod     =
-| directors   =
+| directors   = Yusuf Pirhasan
-| camera      =
+| ad          = Ram Paul Silbey
-| vidplay     =
+| camera      = Kevin Schlanser
-| headwriter  =
+| vidplay     = Joshua Hale Fialkov and Jim Campolongo
-| story       =
+| headwriter  = Joshua Hale Fialkov
-| editor      =
+| story       = Joshua Hale Fialkov and Miles Beckett
-| pm          =
+| editor      = Jerry Pyle, Yusuf Pirhasan, James Renfroe, and Christopher Ryder
 | pc          =
-| pa          =
+| pa          = Andrea Aguilar and Travis Prow
-| pr          =
-| ic          =
 | animation   =
 | prodserv    =
-| music supervisor =
+| music supervisor = Seth Jacobs
 | song        =
 | cast        = {{VidChar|Jonas}}

@@ Line 4: / Line 4: @@
 | number      = 55
 | image       = RES55-JonasSarahReed.jpg
-| caption     = [[Four-letter words|$#*@!]] You're totally making me [[Panic in the Park|panic in parks!]]
+| caption     = $#*@! You're totally making me [[Panic in the Park|panic in parks!]]
 | blogger     = Maggie
 | date        = 20081121

@@ Line 1: / Line 1: @@
 {{Blog
 | name        = {{PAGENAME}}
 | number      = 55
 | image       = RES55-JonasSarahReed.jpg

@@ Line 4: / Line 4: @@
 | image       = RES55-JonasSarahReed.jpg
 | caption     = [[Four-letter words|$#*@!]] You're totally making me [[Panic in the Park|panic in parks!]]
-| blogger     = Hymn of None
+| blogger     = Maggie
 | date        = 20081121
 | url         = {{youtube|_QewDSEaGLc}}<br>{{myspacetv|46884186}}<br>[http://www.imeem.com/people/uwwFzS2/video/ALVEoBVD/hymn_of_none_wrong_play_extreme_video/ imeem.com]

@@ Line 44: / Line 44: @@
 {{VidChar|Reed}}
 | Previous    = Panic in the Park
-| Next        =
+| Next        = Who's That Guy?
 | PreviousB   = Chapter 9: New England Ho!
 | NextB       =
 | PreviousC   =
-| NextC       = Who's That Guy?
+| NextC       =
 | RES         = yes
 }}

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 (''Cars moving down a highway, the sky turns from blue to red.'')
-'''Automated Message:''' You are receiving a call from the LA City Jail (''inaudible'') Station from...
+'''Automated Message:''' You are receiving a call from the LA City Jail Van Nuys Station from...
 '''Jonas:''' Jonas Wharton.

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 (''Cars moving down a highway, the sky turns from blue to red.'')
-'''Automated Message:''' You are receiving a call from the LA City Jail (??) Station from
+'''Automated Message:''' You are receiving a call from the LA City Jail (''inaudible'') Station from...
-'''Jonas:''' Jonas Wharton
+'''Jonas:''' Jonas Wharton.
-'''Automated Message:''' to accept this call please press one. To decline press two. (''beep'')
+'''Automated Message:''' To accept this call please press one. To decline press two.
-{''Scenes from previous blogs containing Maggie and Jonas play throughout Jonas and Maggie's dialogue, they are tinted red.'')
+(''A long beep is heard. Scenes from previous blogs containing Maggie and Jonas play throughout Jonas and Maggie's dialogue, they are tinted red.'')
 '''Jonas:''' Maggie? It's, uh, it's me. Uh, I need you to come bail me out.
-'''Maggie:''' He lied to me. The handsome knight lied to me. He swore an oath, a promise to not mislead and instead he did this. (''Camera zooms into Reed, Jonas and Sarah exiting building. Reed begins to argue with Sarah.'') Jonas and Sarah, they made a (play??) for [[Lifesblood Labs]] without us. They tried to break into the labs and got themselves arrested. Reed bailed them out yesterday afternoon. (''Jonas and Reed arguing, this escalates into a fight. Sarah storms off.'') This is not how a leader behaves. A leader shows strength, faith, trust and planning but instead you decide to sneak around behind our backs. Perhaps my judgment is clouded, that will no longer be a problem. (''Reed punches Jonas and leaves him sprawling on the ground, exits.'') We have a mission and lives depend on us, it's time you remembered that. I need some time. I'll continue to help you from a distance, please do not try to find me. (''Jonas, after standing up and brushing himself off, stares across the street seemingly directly into the camera. Maggie ducks behind a (building?).'')
+'''Voice:''' He lied to me. The handsome knight lied to me. He swore an oath, a promise to not mislead and instead he did this. (''Camera zooms into Reed, Jonas and Sarah exiting building. Reed begins to argue with Sarah.'') Jonas and Sarah, they made a play for [[LifesBlood Labs]] without us. They tried to break into the Labs and got themselves arrested. Reed bailed them out yesterday afternoon. (''Jonas and Reed arguing, this escalates into a fight. Sarah storms off.'') This is not how a leader behaves. A leader shows strength, faith, trust and planning but instead you decide to sneak around behind our backs. Perhaps my judgment is clouded, that will no longer be a problem. (''Reed punches Jonas and leaves him sprawling on the ground, exits.'') We have a mission and lives depend on us, it's time you remembered that. I need some time. I'll continue to help you from a distance. Please do not try to find me.
-(''Fade to black.'')
+(''Jonas, after standing up and brushing himself off, stares across the street seemingly directly into the camera. Maggie ducks behind something. Fade to black.'')
 ==Notes==
 * This is the first time any of the main characters have been arrested, despite their many violations. See [[Crime Report]].

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	==Notes==		==Notes==
−	* This is the first time any of the main characters have been arrested, despite their many violations. See [[~~crime report~~]].	+	* This is the first time any of the main characters have been arrested, despite their many violations. See [[Crime Report]].