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Script episode 'I'm Glad Bree's better'
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 2:09 pm    Post subject: Script episode 'I'm Glad Bree's better' Reply with quote

ok this my script on what i think might happen, but not in the next video in a slightly later video after bree's feeling beter and with Daniel goes off hiking or something for a few days as a treat for bree and naturally they make a video about it, this is what I think Jonas's video will be while they are away, tell me what you think

[Jonas's libary and Jonas is sitting in the hot seat]

Jonas: OK well Beast took Bree hiking or swiming or whatever they do, so its just me here [edit of jonas sitting at a different position] ok I just watched Beast's video looks like they've been having fun [drums on table] so I'm going have some fun of my own i'm going to talk about [sound of glass breaking Jonas looks back over his left sholder] what the fu...

[sudden edit Jonas is sitting further away from the camera with tape over his mouth and hands and feet tied to the chair sitting slumped wih eyes closed, unconcious. Gemma steps into shot looks at jonas then looks into camera and grins wolfishly]

Gemma: Hello bree, have you missed me? my my you have been so very difficult for the past few months but it ends now no more games, either give yourself up to the Order, and dont even think about trying to go to the police or [pulls out a swich blade and presses the butten and the blade flicks out then takes a long step towards the tethered jonas] or you will have provoked us and you shall be rewarded for your actions. And as such pretty boy here shall face our wrath.
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 3:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

That's awesome! I definately think that should happen! Very Happy
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 3:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

thanks
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 3:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Whoa.
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 3:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I don't think Gemma would talk like that, and I think she's been captured/killed... buuuuuut

This script is like 900% better than the last "script" that popped up on the board. So, *MUAH*.
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 3:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think it should be Cassie, not Gemma Smile
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 3:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

i like it...i think it should be gemma - back from the dead Shocked
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 3:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

AniDonia wrote:
I don't think Gemma would talk like that, and I think she's been captured/killed... buuuuuut

This script is like 900% better than the last "script" that popped up on the board. So, *MUAH*.


i know what i wanst so sure about what to make Gemma say so i used an adapted version of an Op Aphid video for the threat at the end and winged the rest
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 4:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

That would be a kickass twist. Though i doubt Gemma is still around. If she is, Brother has a LOT of explaining to do.
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 4:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

girlAnachronism wrote:
That would be a kickass twist. Though i doubt Gemma is still around. If she is, Brother has a LOT of explaining to do.


well i thought about putting somehting like showing a wound to the camera (not the sort of thing that the creator like to do) or haivng an arm in a sling the (but that beggers belief about how she could incapasitate Jonas)

a good thing might be if she wears her hair so its covering half her face do just add a touch of mystery and imply whats happened
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 5:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

lol thats pretty good but how would gemma over power a boxer? lol
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 5:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

iamcool wrote:
lol thats pretty good but how would gemma over power a boxer? lol


years of being an agent op aphid she probably has loads of tricks and martial art techniques
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 5:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

wouldnt jonas just lay her out? lol
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 5:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

iamcool wrote:
wouldnt jonas just lay her out? lol


yup and gemma is captured and/or dead....

and Oppy is MIA ...

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 5:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

iamcool wrote:
wouldnt jonas just lay her out? lol


ok then she his him over the back of the head when he goes to investigat the broken window
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