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laurenesque
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| Olympus321 wrote: | | starman wrote: | | The last word could also be CREATE. I thought I had procreate at first, but only one R... |
I PASS HIS VOICE DOWN I CREATE |
I like this. It fits with "how" whatever is going to be done...
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Nicole
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| Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 6:22 pm Post subject: |
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| Even though it has the right number of syllables, something about the flow doesn't seem right. |
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Olympus321
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| Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 6:23 pm Post subject: |
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Someone like this more:
HIS VOICE I PASS DOWN, I CREATE |
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Olympus321
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| Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 6:26 pm Post subject: |
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NOS collected these in the forum of past ideas.
I PASS HIS VOICE DOWN I CREATE
HIS VOICE I PASS DOWN, I CREATE
VICES POISON A WISH, I'D CREATE
I WORSHIP CASSIE ON VICE DATE
HIS EPIC WOVES CRISIS ON A DATE
IN CAVES ECHOES DRIP, I WAIT
PEACH COVERS INSIDES, I WAIT
VOICES DIES RIP SO HE CAN WAIT
PERISHED VOICE SCIONS AWAIT
IN PRIDES ECHO CAVES, I WAIT
ASIDE COVES ON CIPHERS I WAIT |
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laurenesque
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| Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 6:26 pm Post subject: |
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| Olympus321 wrote: | Someone like this more:
HIS VOICE I PASS DOWN, I CREATE |
Ok. I like that too.  It does seem to flow a bit better with the previous line though.
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Kelrast
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| Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 6:28 pm Post subject: |
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What if we reverse line 5 to:
UNTIL MY FATE ELEVEN DAYS |
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Olympus321
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pcbbc
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| Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 6:33 pm Post subject: |
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| Is it me, or does it look like she deliberately obscured the last line even more? |
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Luv2Skydive
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ceboiswatching
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| Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 6:45 pm Post subject: |
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| anchor cove seems to be in there doesnt it? |
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laurenesque
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| Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 6:49 pm Post subject: |
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| ceboiswatching wrote: | | anchor cove seems to be in there doesnt it? |
It is. If you pull it out, the leftovers are: EDWSTIEIPSAI
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ceboiswatching
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| Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 6:52 pm Post subject: |
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| anchor cove dies.....more left overs.... |
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hophead
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| Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 7:02 pm Post subject: |
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Take "A Voice Within" Out.
You have left:
EDESOPSCRSAI |
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Nicole
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| Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 7:06 pm Post subject: |
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Maybe somebody with photo editing software can start working on the image again so that we can have a better idea of what the beginning of line 6 should look like?  |
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christof
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| Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 7:07 pm Post subject: |
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ok...I'm sure this is silly....but I just got in and saw the anchor cove thing
and...I got this...
I despise anchor cove wait...if it's a trout sorry...and sorry to the anchor cove people...love u *blows kisses*  |
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