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		JerseyJohnny Enthusiastic Fan
  
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				 Posted: Thu Oct 19, 2006 1:36 am    Post subject: Poetry Corner | 
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				I remember a couple folks mentioning we should have a poetry thread, so I'm starting one.  Mods, if this isn't the right place for it, please move the thread where it should be - thanks!   
 
This thread is for you to post your own poetry or poetry of others that you think will benefit those who read them.  
 
 
Here is my first poem that I will share to get the ball started.  I think it is very pertinent to recent developments in these message boards and to peoples' feelings and attitudes, including my own:
 
 
Sirens In The Night
 
by Ogviolet
 
 
Here we sit at 2 a. m.
 
wondering once again if we will
 
be here tomorrow, wondering
 
how we can hate each other
 
so much
 
 
We watch our satellite TV and
 
just when we think we've got the
 
world in our hands, our lives
 
and existence are in
 
danger once more
 
 
Here we sit in out ignorance, our
 
world is the only one we know and
 
we don't even try to understand those
 
that live on our planet yet
 
outside our world
 
 
We take no time to stop, to
 
see that the things we value
 
are the very things keeping
 
us all apart with our accusing
 
hypocritical fingers
 
 
We sit here trying to help
 
where no help is wanted, taking
 
the most precious things
 
that we were trying
 
to preserve
 
 
The flocks don't know
 
the herd doesn't know
 
but the ones who do, fight
 
like jealous 5 year
 
olds in the sandbox
 
 
We sit here hoping
 
some praying, some wishing,
 
some longing+loving+hating
 
but it might just be
 
too late now to save anyone
 
so you'd better save yourself
 
 
sirens in the night
 
facades in the day
 
play the game, keep everything
 
running just as it should
 
instead of living like this
 
could be the last day
 
of your life . . . and this
 
 
could be the last day . . .
 
 
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		SuperRad Lonely Fan
  
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				 Posted: Sun Oct 22, 2006 11:20 pm    Post subject:  | 
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				I like the idea of a poetry thread!  And in hopes that more people will start posting their poetry, I'll post some of my lame poetry. 
 
 
 I used to like to write cryptic verse-libre (Archie and Metihable inspired) slam style poetry like this:
 
 
To My Friends, My Family, My Galaxy, and Myself.
 
 
 
They call them weeds but dandelions
 
Make the world a whole lot more beautiful
 
As the bright yellow puff of soft petals
 
Bobbles gently to an unknown rhythm
 
And a field of dead grass
 
Suddenly becomes a dream world
 
And when it begins to seed
 
The dreams could all come true
 
A weed is just a plant where you don’t want it to be.
 
I’m not where I want to be.
 
Pluck me from my soil and cast me aside
 
So the beautiful people can have their way
 
And so can I.
 
 
The stars are small from far away
 
But to them you’re not so big
 
And on them, other forms of life
 
Who know their place, and yours
 
Are laughing
 
From morphed green mouths
 
At the little blind speck
 
Of dust
 
Floating aimlessly through the air
 
 
A speck of dust can float forever
 
And no one could ever see it
 
Care to notice it
 
Want to be near it
 
And when the sun blares
 
And the rays shine through
 
The dark that seems determined
 
Sometimes it is visible
 
Whether or not it wishes to be seen.
 
 
And when I was still in a band, I liked to write cryptic lyrics like this that only made sense to me very late at night (It's about being a silly superstitious little kid with parent troubles):
 
 
 
Where is my Night Life?
 
	
 
So just what exactly has been going on,
 
And what’s been happening to me?
 
When we used to be young and sweet
 
Then did we ever believe?
 
Now the buildings climb too high up there
 
Like walls with no end in sight
 
And our jaded little planet
 
Is too cluttered with intelligent life
 
And will we ever believe again?
 
Before we’ve come to our end
 
And we’re staring up into the sky with fear
 
That they’ll come and take us out of here
 
Take us to somewhere better than this
 
For our work to disappear
 
 
The Martians landed just last week,
 
We could watch it all from the streets,
 
And I jumped off all the high buildings
 
Just to try to save the world,
 
To try to find some sleep
 
I remember this road from before
 
The potholes that shook us all over
 
And it’s importance had long since faded
 
From that time he couldn’t save her.
 
And they had assured me they hadn’t come far
 
They had landed from a nearby star
 
And they said, ‘there is no such thing
 
As intelligent life,
 
You all are just thinking you are.’
 
 
I’d been feeling the need to run
 
And I begged them to please let me come
 
And they laughed when they saw
 
The tears in my eyes and they went
 
Back to where they were from
 
And I climbed the highest buildings once more
 
All the facts then I tried to ignore
 
The highest buildings were only three feet high
 
And the fall only made my feet sore.
 
So I wandered the road like I had
 
The day he had made her feel bad
 
And the potholes were still there
 
But they just couldn’t even
 
Shake me any more.
 
 
Also, a poem about my goldfish.
 
 
 
Gill Manfish and the Whimsical Terrarium
 
	
 
 
Gill Manfish had a terrarium
 
Where he kept a couple men
 
And every night he’d watch it’s glow
 
From his water bed
 
 
And every morning when they arose
 
They’d make an offering of a pinch
 
Of fishy flakes just to say thanks
 
For being such a kind fish
 
 
He’d watch them over with buggy eyes
 
And fawn over their peachy skin
 
While every day they would smile
 
And they would fawn over him.
 
 
Oh, he admired all their innocence,
 
How they really seemed to believe,
 
They were in control of Mr. Manfish,
 
When they were silly human beings. | 
			 
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		Kasdeja Hymn of One
  
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				 Posted: Mon Oct 23, 2006 5:35 am    Post subject:  | 
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				Drone
 
 
Munching popcorn and watching the world pass by,
 
Fake smiles and empty hello’s uttered in sheer habit.
 
Idiotic ramblings from passersby, droning and repetitious.
 
Asinine comments as if someone actually cares.
 
 
Day in, day out, same routine over and again.
 
Perky, smiling, programmed so nicely.
 
I fit right into your world, seemingly perfect.
 
Like a puzzle piece that has been altered to fit.
 
 
Yet my mind aches to be free of this place.
 
This Peyton’s Place of petty rumors and happenings.
 
Peeking over shoulders and reading incognito.
 
Automated voices from security doors keep me awake. | 
			 
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		AutoPilate The Order of Denderah
  
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				 Posted: Mon Oct 23, 2006 5:50 am    Post subject:  | 
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				"The Changing of the Hafaza"
 
 
Fire sinks
 
Into the far-off curved sand
 
While balls of noble gases float in the bloodstream
 
 
Clay, decay, scorpion tails and dragon wings
 
Poised like so many pointy-eared archers
 
Waiting for the signal to fire at will
 
 
So shove a finger, a microphone, a fist!
 
Into the puckering anus of history:
 
The initial resistance, the buttery ease of the rest of the way,
 
The mad shrieking--
 
Yes! express orgiastic delight by yawping ciphers
 
And algebraic formulae
 
Into or against the hot winds of progress
 
In tune or discordant with the flatus of acquiescence
 
 
Explore the smoothness of the drop
 
The venomous walls of the universe
 
Climb onto the hollow fang, the forked tongue
 
That tastes the air and creates
 
 
Blink in idiotic awe
 
At the moon that hovers overhead
 
Original Sin
 
The first of seven gates
 
The olives and pomegranates underfoot
 
Mealy stew spiced with flakes of dead skin
 
 
Weave the web, the flesh that crawls
 
Like tense needle-thin legs across primordial seas
 
Skittering above the chaos
 
The head that swallows the tail
 
The steaming carcass that defines heaven and earth
 
Clay, decay, beehives and pressed leaves in a bronze mortar
 
Leaden plates and bowls that kill
 
 
Fire rises
 
Out of the distant curved sand _________________ Why was there BACON IN THE SOAP?!
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		gelb9 Casual Observer
  
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				 Posted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 10:10 am    Post subject:  | 
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				Alright, I'll bite.. here's one of mine:
 
 
 
LAKE
 
 
Together quickly they rode
 
The open night
 
Spreading before them
 
Fear building with each step..
 
What had happened?
 
How had it been allowed?
 
Pace quickening now
 
Breath falling harder, faster
 
Cool night air
 
Tearing at this sweat stained brow
 
Though, Malevolent and looming
 
Oily and still
 
It stood next to him.
 
As the hours passed
 
Rounded fingers
 
Spreading from heart to shore
 
And back again.
 
Over and over, a cycle
 
Mockery and mimicry
 
The soft gentle lapping
 
Immediately gave way
 
To Sinister voices
 
Echoing throughout the ripples
 
Contorting his sanity
 
To do their will and bidding.
 
Ah, again, the silence became too loud
 
This time he saw the clouds
 
Felt his heart floating
 
All the while not realizing--
 
From his hands her blood,
 
From it's hands his blood. | 
			 
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		AutoPilate The Order of Denderah
  
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				 Posted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 10:52 am    Post subject:  | 
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				Very nice!   _________________ Why was there BACON IN THE SOAP?! | 
			 
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		AutoPilate The Order of Denderah
  
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				 Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 12:04 pm    Post subject:  | 
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				Aurora Means Dawn
 
 
And in your eyes I find
 
Indiff'rent light:
 
The fires that raged
 
Parsecs away
 
Millennia ago
 
 
The studied, unknowable arcs of the universe
 
Have nothing
 
On the Big Bang
 
Your warm curves create
 
Each and every picosecond
 
 
Peeking,
 
Just over the horizon,
 
The pulsar of your cunning wink, mad glint!
 
Peaking,
 
Over the crests, hoarse sighs,
 
Hot vowels that sound so like
 
"I love you" and "I love you so much!"
 
 
Bathing in the nova of your ev'ry touch
 
 
O! what beat this
 
That slinks its sinuous way
 
Into my melting heart?
 
 
What dominant rhythm this
 
That makes hungry magma
 
Of my quivering extremities?
 
 
How thirsty my tongue
 
That would flip about your receptive mouth,
 
Scraping free of planetoid plaque
 
Your perfect constellation of teeth
 
 
Finding in each loving jiggle
 
Another reason to breathe, to feed the haggard spirit,
 
To fuel a starving white dwarf
 
With your beatific light. _________________ Why was there BACON IN THE SOAP?! | 
			 
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		agent_fondue The Order of Denderah
  
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				 Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 12:46 pm    Post subject:  | 
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				We have one less day than we did yesterday. 
 
 
 
I don't mind you don't know where your going.
 
 
I want to go with you.
 
 
 
 
 
I'd love to change the world, but
 
 
 
 
 
I look farther than I see
 
 
I'm so aware of where I am, but I don't know where that is.
 
 
 
 
 
I thought I was the only one moving in slow motion
 
 
This place is paradise, I'm sure.
 
 
 
 
 
I do the best imitation of myself.
 
 
 
 
 
Wait for me, I'm nothing on my own. _________________ But you can call me chisa chan.... or cheese.
 
 
Vote 'mute in '08! - because Paris Hilton and P. Diddy will both talk about it for months without acctually doing it themselves.
 
 
 
"Celebrate we will for life is short but sweet for certain."
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		agent_fondue The Order of Denderah
  
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				 Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 12:47 pm    Post subject:  | 
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				The Things to make me whole again.
 
 
 
 
Looking back, it seems so clear now.
 
 
You could rule the world if you wanted to.
 
 
And yeah i'm lost, but maybe i'll be fine.
 
 
Tell me you feel just like I do.
 
 
Make me laugh again. I need you around.
 
 
I like your eyes, they say your true.
 
 
You have so many scars and you hide them like they mean nothing.
 
 
Tell me you feel just like I do.
 
 
Excuse me if I tried and failed.
 
 
I confess I was such a mess.
 
 
Will you try to water this down?
 
 
What could be, wouldnt be now.
 
 
And tell me you feel just like I do. _________________ But you can call me chisa chan.... or cheese.
 
 
Vote 'mute in '08! - because Paris Hilton and P. Diddy will both talk about it for months without acctually doing it themselves.
 
 
 
"Celebrate we will for life is short but sweet for certain."
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		agent_fondue The Order of Denderah
  
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				 Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 12:48 pm    Post subject:  | 
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				I never learned enough to know 
 
 
Its almost summertime and the wind is blowing outside.
 
 
You tell me these things and say you know I will understand.
 
I see the way your face has changed and the clouds are building.
 
 
Do you fake a smile when you dodge the blows?
 
I wouldn’t have.
 
I don’t understand. 
 
 
I know there is a reason to change.
 
You think about the good times but you live with the bad.
 
So you harden your shell, and you slowly lose yourself.
 
 
I know you get so lonely in this crowd.
 
 
But, I don’t understand. _________________ But you can call me chisa chan.... or cheese.
 
 
Vote 'mute in '08! - because Paris Hilton and P. Diddy will both talk about it for months without acctually doing it themselves.
 
 
 
"Celebrate we will for life is short but sweet for certain."
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		nobackspacebutton The Order of Denderah
  
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				 Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 1:23 pm    Post subject:  | 
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				These are from a few years ago...but here are just a few:
 
 
Our Neverending Story
 
You say you''ll never leave, and that I will never lose you. 
 
But that doesn''t mean tonight won''t be your last. 
 
I don''t take one day of our love for granted, 
 
But just in case it all gets ripped away, 
 
And something goes wrong in this dream, 
 
You''ll know we''ll always be together. 
 
 
Our Neverending story began the day we met, 
 
And will never compose its last page. 
 
If love surpasses distance and time, 
 
Surely death cannot block its path. 
 
A light so bright doesn''t burn out in the darkness, 
 
Eternal love doesn''t fade into complete nothingness. 
 
A feeling so strong doesn''t just disappear. 
 
 
I treasure each second we can share, 
 
I memorize each feeling you give me. 
 
What we have will never end. 
 
Even when our physical bodies are gone, 
 
Our spirits will sing our same song. 
 
Soulmates of this lifetime and more to come, 
 
Always and forever, you''ll be my only one.
 
 
Copyright ©2007 Bethann Jackson 
 
 
 
Dedicated
 
Before I found you I was lost and destroyed 
 
In a world where only hate was deployed 
 
Darkness surrounded me, all colors had faded 
 
As I fell deeper into a death that seemed to be fated 
 
 
My heart was giving away to its final beat 
 
My soul felt to have reached its ultimate defeat 
 
Then you took me deep inside your soul 
 
And gave me the greatest love I'd ever know 
 
 
Never was a love so perfect 
 
Never was a love so free 
 
Never could the timing be better 
 
Never could someone take you from me 
 
 
I never remembered love feeling this strong before 
 
With that I know, everything we are is worth fighting for 
 
You're so perfect for me in so many ways 
 
Falling for you was the best choice I've ever made 
 
 
 
Copyright ©2007 Bethann Jackson 
 
 
 
Your Bloody Valentine
 
I truely am your bloody valentine 
 
You said you loved me and then you killed me 
 
Right through the heart, you thrust your sword 
 
All the while screaming you loved me. 
 
You twisted it all so that I would believe 
 
then let it all crash down on me 
 
Glass broke through my skin 
 
Knives carved into my flesh 
 
My bones all shook 
 
Then crumbled to dust 
 
Those moments where our love was true 
 
It was all a lie to you 
 
Pain, grief, torment was felt 
 
Here I am, your bloody valentine 
 
your one love for all of time 
 
The waters of my life tinted crimson forever 
 
I sweat my own blood 
 
Here I am, your loving bloody valentine 
 
Here to haunt your dreams 
 
for all of time. 
 
 
Copyright ©2007 Bethann Jackson _________________ What ever happened to that girl BA?
 
 
BA Tells Lies.
 
 
Some things are secret for a reason. 
 
There are people whose lives are dedicated to keeping them that way. | 
			 
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		betz28 The Order of Denderah
  
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				 Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 1:45 pm    Post subject:  | 
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				the bud light label
 
 
last night i was sitting on my back porch drinking a bud light, peeling off the label of a somewhat lukewarm bottle and suddenly had a revelation.  the label peeled so easily as though it was not really attached to the bottle at all.  it just molded to the shape of the bottle.
 
 
my strange mind could not help but compare myself to the bud light label...i sat there for like 15 minutes staring at the bottle.  yeah, i could not help but think to myself that i was a little bit crazy but let me try to explain.  i think sometimes that people do not have a clue as to where their life is headed.  we all just mold and adapt to the situation that we are put in in life.  
 
 
we are like the bud light label...not attached to anything and can easily be stripped away of what is comfortable on our lives.   i realize there is so much more i could do with my life and I do not need to sit around and just adapt in this environment...i need to make a difference. | 
			 
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		nobackspacebutton The Order of Denderah
  
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				 Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 1:48 pm    Post subject:  | 
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				 	  | betz28 wrote: | 	 		  the bud light label
 
 
last night i was sitting on my back porch drinking a bud light, peeling off the label of a somewhat lukewarm bottle and suddenly had a revelation.  the label peeled so easily as though it was not really attached to the bottle at all.  it just molded to the shape of the bottle.
 
 
my strange mind could not help but compare myself to the bud light label...i sat there for like 15 minutes staring at the bottle.  yeah, i could not help but think to myself that i was a little bit crazy but let me try to explain.  i think sometimes that people do not have a clue as to where their life is headed.  we all just mold and adapt to the situation that we are put in in life.  
 
 
we are like the bud light label...not attached to anything and can easily be stripped away of what is comfortable on our lives.   i realize there is so much more i could do with my life and I do not need to sit around and just adapt in this environment...i need to make a difference. | 	  
 
 
 
whoa _________________ What ever happened to that girl BA?
 
 
BA Tells Lies.
 
 
Some things are secret for a reason. 
 
There are people whose lives are dedicated to keeping them that way. | 
			 
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		AutoPilate The Order of Denderah
  
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				 Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 1:56 pm    Post subject:  | 
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				The Passion of the Crust
 
 
Wounds of pepperoni slices
 
Scattered 'cross the twelve-inch disk,
 
Deep dish, deep!  Deliver crisis,
 
Else you take a whiplash risk.
 
 
Having tossed the doughy crown up,
 
Stoke the fire and tend the heat.
 
Catch tomato sauce in clay cup,
 
Bread and fish and sprinkled meat.
 
 
Now, next Station, on the double!
 
Call came in an hour ago.
 
Shredded cheeses form a bubble,
 
Garnish with oregano.
 
 
  Cardboard box, the secret garden:
 
  Martyr's arteries don't harden. _________________ Why was there BACON IN THE SOAP?! | 
			 
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		betz28 The Order of Denderah
  
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				 Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 1:59 pm    Post subject:  | 
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				 	  | nobackspacebutton wrote: | 	 		   	  | betz28 wrote: | 	 		  the bud light label
 
 
last night i was sitting on my back porch drinking a bud light, peeling off the label of a somewhat lukewarm bottle and suddenly had a revelation.  the label peeled so easily as though it was not really attached to the bottle at all.  it just molded to the shape of the bottle.
 
 
my strange mind could not help but compare myself to the bud light label...i sat there for like 15 minutes staring at the bottle.  yeah, i could not help but think to myself that i was a little bit crazy but let me try to explain.  i think sometimes that people do not have a clue as to where their life is headed.  we all just mold and adapt to the situation that we are put in in life.  
 
 
we are like the bud light label...not attached to anything and can easily be stripped away of what is comfortable on our lives.   i realize there is so much more i could do with my life and I do not need to sit around and just adapt in this environment...i need to make a difference. | 	  
 
 
 
whoa | 	  
 
 
That really wasn't last night...more like 2 years ago.  but yeah, strange feeling. | 
			 
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