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| − | This summary turned out to be great and organized. I did some editing on the page, so the verb tense would be consistant. In addition, there seems to be many, many links on the page. Does anyone think there are too many? Author(s) of that section, please see my questions/comments/revision as contributions to your work. Please understand: I'm an English teacher, and it is rare that I get to use my knowledge of verb tense, grammar, writing and revision outside of the classroom. :) --[[User:Ogog]] November 23, 2006 (12:03 a.m.) | + | This summary turned out to be great and well-organized. I did some editing on the page, so the verb tense would be consistant. In addition, there seems to be many, many links on the page. Does anyone think there are too many? Author(s) of that section, please see my questions/comments/revision as contributions to your work. Please understand: I'm an English teacher, and it is rare that I get to use my knowledge of verb tense, grammar, writing and revision outside of the classroom. :) --[[User:Ogog]] November 23, 2006 (12:03 a.m.) |
Revision as of 05:05, 23 November 2006
New organized summary
This summary turned out to be great and well-organized. I did some editing on the page, so the verb tense would be consistant. In addition, there seems to be many, many links on the page. Does anyone think there are too many? Author(s) of that section, please see my questions/comments/revision as contributions to your work. Please understand: I'm an English teacher, and it is rare that I get to use my knowledge of verb tense, grammar, writing and revision outside of the classroom. :) --User:Ogog November 23, 2006 (12:03 a.m.)
