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im just a sophmore in high school and i just rant on and on and dont pay attention to my tenses. So thanks for doing that! Im glad Bree is reaching all kinds of audiences. | im just a sophmore in high school and i just rant on and on and dont pay attention to my tenses. So thanks for doing that! Im glad Bree is reaching all kinds of audiences. | ||
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Revision as of 13:22, 24 November 2006
New organized summary
This summary turned out to be well-organized. I did some editing on the page, so the verb tense would be consistant. I also removed any reference to the audience (we learned...etc.) to keep the narrative in the third person (point of view). In addition, there seems to be many, many links on the page. Does anyone think there are too many? Author(s) of that section, please see my questions/comments/revision as contributions to your work. Please understand: I'm an English teacher, and it is rare that I get to use my knowledge of verb tense, grammar, writing and revision outside of the classroom. :) --User:Ogog November 23, 2006 (12:03 a.m.)
Thanks
im just a sophmore in high school and i just rant on and on and dont pay attention to my tenses. So thanks for doing that! Im glad Bree is reaching all kinds of audiences.
Merryprankster91 07:22, 24 November 2006 (CST)
